Reviews for ZikiZaki stick fight

[Step]

Well...

Everything happened too quickly and I had no idea what was going on, plus it was really short.

The artwork was just stickmen and some badly drawn effects. Try making some good background, and make the blood (if there was any... I'm not so sure; everything happened too quickly...) have more texture and look more realistic.

The animation wasn't too smooth, and there wasn't much of it either. Just a few hands moving, some effects moving, and (I think) a stickman falling to the ground (which was just him disappearing when he was standing up and appearing when he's lying down). You should put in some transitions, like him falling down properly and the effects not coming in so suddenly.

Another problem was that everything happened too quickly. Text just flashed all over the place and I had to replay the movie dozens of times to manage to read most of the text. It's a little short as well, so you should add speech bubbles which don't appear and disappear straight away, and a longer fight. There was no sound either...

To summarize, it definitely needs some work. Try and make better ones which don't feel so random.
2/10
1/5

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killerchai responds:

Yay my best score!

[Fro]

Clock Day FTW!

The day that even the worst animations make it past judgment. This had worst quality then my first submission that was blammed, which was simply a Mario running across the screen looped.

~ Animation/Graphics ~

I'm guessing this was made in pivot? Or pivot and flash, or maybe it was just flash. Well the animation part is impossible to give you a review on because it moves too fast. Looked like if it did move slow that it wouldn't be anything too great to look at though. One of the things that I did catch was that you used a white background all the way through. Why not make a more detailed background next time. Something like green grass, trees in the background, etc..

~ Story/Content ~

Well if this was made in flash then you need to stretch the frames out a bit longer. That's the only thing that I can recommend here as I couldn't see what was going on in the flash to give you an opinion on the content of it.

~ Audio ~

Was none. No room for it actually, but since you figured out how to make it longer you should try to find some audio that fits it.

~ Overall ~

Happy Clockday.

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[FlashtooREV]

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I'm going to be honest with you.
There barely was anything to see in the Flash. You only used the paint bucket tool on the tank and made a very ugly background, with the paint bucket presets.

The animation was only three seconds long or so and I couldn't understand a thing. The text just Flashed, they barely moved and the special effects were slow and ugly.

You really have to throw this away and start over. Learn, practice, and you might make something good.
Rev'd

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[themodtester]

This is .. Well...

Let's see..

The animations were horrible, the stick figures barely even MOVED.
It's too fast.
Bad, very bad, sorry mate, you need to read some one or two tut's.

killerchai responds:

Like it said its experimental and i suck at animation but im doing this alone with no help so dont tell me the obvious plz

[SFFLgames]

Work on it.

Slow. It. Down.

killerchai responds:

i found out how to slow it down after i finsished it.