Score: 10

"Follow the dreams!"

by: oOWild69Oo

date: June 13, 2009

10.
Is a fantastic video with a profound insegnament.
Good job.

P.S.: perdone my english, im italian

Score: 10

"It's a 10, but you wanted the little details..."

by: Lord1Mauler

date: June 2, 2009

First of all-WOW-GJ.

Little details-
1. Add more time for the graduation picture at the end.
2. In the beginning scenes, make your lines a tad thicker so it doesn't look like chicken scratch.
3. Personally, I don't think it needs music, it's perfect where it is. The silence and Sound FX of your characters keeps me/audience glued to the screen.
4. The dream-A little confusing, but all dreams are. Cool drawings, that's a plus.
5. I suggest you zoom in on the oragami's that he has in the suitcase-this is a tiny detail.
6. After those tips I gave above, don't do anymore to it, or you'll worry yourself in your sleep.

A lot of mystery stirred within me when I tried to figure out what was going to happen, what the climax was. This is a great movie for a film festival-Great idea.
You're on my fav's. Congrats and GL. 10/10

Score: 10

"exelent"

by: jacko11223344

date: June 2, 2009

i loved it im voting 5 keep up the awesome work :)

Score: 8

""very good""

by: catscratch1313

date: June 2, 2009

um when hes going to work in the hall the arms look a little wierd but after good i'd like to know what happend to him after all will people buy it? very good jokes and everything i liked it i give you an 8/10

Score: 10

"Very Impressive!"

by: Fireballmadness

date: June 1, 2009

Over all very nice! somethings you could do is
1 during the opening scene you should have the vehicles moving
2 When the guy walks into the office, his walking is to exaggerated
3 Tell us what happened to the person! and then a funny line.
Except for those things, it's perfect!