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Excellent story and characterization, all that I can suggest is that you clean up the animation, and maybe add some music behind it since there isn't any real voice acting going on. That will make it feel more full and dynamic.
Reviews for "The Paper Prince"
:) I like it.
The concept is great. I love it. However, the animation could use some cleaning up, especially the dream-fight scene. I even had trouble making out the different soldiers at first. Once you get that squared away, it'll be 10/10 for me. Good job and good luck.
Well...
This was an interesting toon in almost all regards. But I couldn't follow it towards the end. But maybe thats just me. All in all, good job.
its good but...
I liked it dont get me wrong but it didn't seem like there was anypoint to it?? am i wrong, is it do what makes u happy? idk just personal pet peeve that something that goes into a contest means something other than just pointless babble
Not bad...
I really liked this movie, but as everyone said, the dream sequence was too short. And the movie finished too early, i would have liked to know a bit more... How about a sequel?