Not that bad
Not so perfect but ok!
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well I continued a part of it the next one is going to be the end of episode 1 and hello to episode 2!
ok lots of time was spent on this so... you know! note: if you seen this in the obits. that is the one i was continueing from it was not blamed. i am just continueing is on this. edit: i nkow it is short and not perfect but deal with it!
Aspiring
I love seing aspiring flash creator attempting madness clones. Brings a warm feeling. I know your work can only get better and i cant wait.
All the simple things worth mentioning have already been said, such as frame rate story line, etc. But when cloning madness i think its always good to bring your own touch and maybe eventually characters to the table.
It would make something good, great.
Krage399 responds:
thanks man (+) <--- madness face.)
... a mock frame-by-frame or something?
Learn to TWEEN! It's the bread and butter of any madness cloner. Well, that and ripped off character sheets without proper crediting...
Krage399 responds:
Umm how do you tween madness? just askin.
very good
is very good
Not bad
It was okay... I just think ur story line needs a bit of working on, and increase the frame rate
Krage399 responds:
alrighty i am always open to what need inproved. =)