well
the idea had nothing original about it. the movements of the characters needed to be more natural. the enemies just appeared, they didnt actually walk into the scene from a doorway. the effects need work - the blood looked like it was a single bullethole copied and pasted over the faces. the music wasn't bad. the story needed a little work or explanation because i didn't understand why jesus was in disguise and why the clown kidnapped jesus. also, there were a few spelling errors or grammar errors in the sub-titles.