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Interesting, once you add a plot and sound this would get an 8/10 probaly.
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This is my first ever flash movie!
I don't want to be told I'm rubbish, I already know that, and I know it isn't original, but i just need some points in the right direction please =]
I was just experimenting with motion tweening and motion guiding.
Enjoy!
deado000 responds:
thanks a lot for the review :)
Lemme put it this way...
As someone who is worse inf lash than anyone else, this is good, compared to anything I can do... However, try to restrict your submissions on Newgrounds to things you positively love... I realize you want people to tell you how it is, but this is just too short, and lacks a plot to be put on the portal. However, your art style is quality, and with a little more effort and time, you'll do just fine!
deado000 responds:
thanks, i just need to think of a plotline, then work around it.
thanks a lot for the compliments and review =]
sorry but
this is terrible
i dont think animation tests should be on newgrounds but the animation is terrible anyway
deado000 responds:
thanks a lot for your point of view =]
koo.
kool, pretty good for a first time. i gave it a 4/5.
deado000 responds:
cheers, i only got it a couple of days ago, watched a couple of tutorials, then just experimented.
thanks a lot for the review =]
...Kinda slow
Yah... I don't know what else to say.. except maybe to only tween for bout 3-5 frames... but i'm not sure how many it went thru so i can't really say much 'cept that it's just a little too slow
deado000 responds:
yeah, well i set it to 30fps and i was half way through making when i changed it, so i had to extend to frames, but i must have gone a little too far
thanks a lot for the review =]
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