Pretty good
Yeah, this needs some audio. The graphics were pretty good though and the idea was pretty cool. More of a plot would have been nice too; it was kind of short as well. You definately have skill though. Overall, good job.
7/10
~ Z
Author Comments
Finally, I got around to working on it, and now it's done.
Another strange flash movie that was strangely drawn and animated by a weird guy.
In this one, our ill-fated friend tries the classic angry-rhinoceros-on-the-e nd-of-a-rope trick.
If you don't like this, leave some CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM with AT LEAST the typing skill and vocabulary of a ten-year-old.
(P.S. This does not count as constructive criticism:
LOLROTFLPTHWFARGTL U SUX0RZ N3V3R M4KE 10NE 4G41/\/!!!!!1111111234567 8910111213)
Remember, I respond to ALL reviews, and match them in intelligence and abusiveness.
P.S. This is the same commment from last time with slight modifications made. Deal with it.
B
I have no idea what just happened.
Needs improvement. I suggest that you practice drawing the human figure, instead of poseable mannequins. Also needs music, maybe SFX.
moo23 responds:
Finally, some usefull info. Alright, I will add some SFX, but I don't see the difference between mannequins and people.
ok that was ...uuummm?... Mimes are scary
"If you don't like this, leave some CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM with AT LEAST the typing skill and vocabulary of a ten-year-old."
you said this and you shall get it.
OMG I IS TEH L337ER 7HAN YOU IS 7EH L337 HAX0R5
or however they talk.
Now i am going to be serious that wasn't a vey good movie a longer movie would have been good but if you really work hard on a movie it will be good enough to get through judgement.
And the stuff I have seen today.... I think just about anything can get through judgement.
moo23 responds:
Thanks! I'll be sure to add THAT tomy movie right away!
sound plz
sound music anything is better than nothing.
moo23 responds:
A'ight
Meh
I didn't really like the animation and how the blood was just blah.
moo23 responds:
That's what I think it would look like if someone got trampled by a rhino.
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