not bad one
it was an alright animation... though it really needed audio in some sort or another. the idea behind it was cool though could've had a little more detail to it.
overall, it was an alright animation, but it really needs sound.
Author Comments
My first Flash movie, featuring some cheesy animation...but it still took me lots of time to make. The inspiration came from a friend who love kiwis and I would always want to put a smile on her. Some friend made a comment about how it would be more interesting to have music and sound but I simply have 0.0000 music talent, so if someone would be interested in giving the story an audible dimension aka music and sound please message me! Thanks a lot. Oh and thanks for watching :)
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^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie, especially for your first. The storyline was cute, I liked it. Your characters are unique and the storyline was unique and explained well also.
^^Needs Improving^^
As you said, the animations are really quite crude. I can deal with that, but my major problem about this is that it was pretty boring. The storyline seemed to drag on forever and I had to force myself to watch to the end. The lack of sound doesn't help your situation either. You definitely need to add sound.
omnimike responds:
Thanks for the constructive comment, I agree the pace can be improved and adding sound and music would help, I'll work on those if time permit :)
I love the idea
I just wished there was some sound, other than that, it was sweet.
Make one with sound. If this was your first, then great job.
Sincerely,
Agent -47-
omnimike responds:
Thank you for the positive comment, now that I've seen more works from other clips posted here I guess I'll try to find some good music clips for it :)
W-O-W...
That was so funny but sweet, if this gets blammed then the people who blammed it suck.
omnimike responds:
Thanks for the nice comment! I'm happy to hear that someone appreciate it :)
FIRST ANIMATION!!!!
if that really was your first WOW, and sound would be good
but other than that it was good
omnimike responds:
Thanks, yeah I agree having sound would be nice, I'll try to borrow some music suitable for the clip since I can't compose myself.
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