Reviews for Mr.Kiwi's Story

[starvingdude]

W-O-W...

That was so funny but sweet, if this gets blammed then the people who blammed it suck.

omnimike responds:

Thanks for the nice comment! I'm happy to hear that someone appreciate it :)

[Tamasan]

A simple yet sweet flash with a bit of comedy too.

I liked this because it is cute and it is a great exanple of a simple concept that is well implemented for it's style. The characters are interesting enough to keep the focus of the viewer without distracting from the story. Nice work.

omnimike responds:

Thanks for your kind comments. It's great encouragement. :)

[Agentfortyseven]

I love the idea

I just wished there was some sound, other than that, it was sweet.
Make one with sound. If this was your first, then great job.

Sincerely,
Agent -47-

omnimike responds:

Thank you for the positive comment, now that I've seen more works from other clips posted here I guess I'll try to find some good music clips for it :)

[CalamityColon]

FIRST ANIMATION!!!!

if that really was your first WOW, and sound would be good
but other than that it was good

omnimike responds:

Thanks, yeah I agree having sound would be nice, I'll try to borrow some music suitable for the clip since I can't compose myself.

[FattyWhale]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie, especially for your first. The storyline was cute, I liked it. Your characters are unique and the storyline was unique and explained well also.

^^Needs Improving^^
As you said, the animations are really quite crude. I can deal with that, but my major problem about this is that it was pretty boring. The storyline seemed to drag on forever and I had to force myself to watch to the end. The lack of sound doesn't help your situation either. You definitely need to add sound.

omnimike responds:

Thanks for the constructive comment, I agree the pace can be improved and adding sound and music would help, I'll work on those if time permit :)