This was intresting!
This was intresting and well directed. I think you have talent in storywriting and directing. Some parts were just brilliant, while other sucked... Those blinking comments sucked. Your voive didnt matched at the end. Intended.. nope i think you rushed it. But all in all very good.
Animations 7/10 (geez some parts just needed a few more frames/while others were just brilliant)
Voice 7/10 (Could be a bit better, but wasnt that bad)
Drawings 6/10 (You can draw, but it lacks a personal style. Perspective was wrong sometimes. Some other minor stuff. Your backrounds suck. All in all its too static...the lines are just not 100% fitting to your avatar)
Directed 10/10 (Your greatest talent)
Music 8/10 (fitted perfect most of the time)
Design 6/10 ( I dont like those bad Flash references like the blinking comments. Without them this would be an awesome documentary)