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This sprite movie is finally here! I worked hard on it and would appreciate reviews.
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at least you could have made that vid have some form of sense crushed by a foot wtf?!?! but cool style i like the video game flashes :D
I thought more people would recognize that as the foot from Monty Python...guess not.
Well, I like that you're using sprites. I love sprites. Ok, You should consider making Ness a bit smaller, or the houses bigger.
The plot was ok for starters. Now, you should expand more.
I'm sorry if this might get blammed. it was a funny short for me. Just keep practicing Sprites.
thanks for the pointers
Oh noes a giant Ness is atacking the city!
Call in the millitary! Call the navy! help! any way the movie okay. couldnt seem to understand it though. just make it a bit longer.
There really wasn't anything to understand but thanks anyway
It was alright
The flash animation was mediocre at best. Instead of focusing on the negatives, I will focus more on improvements: Your text moves too slow. Many of us can read faster. Also, when Ness blacks out, there is one pixel you forgot to shade in. I played Earthbound, and I don't think you could climb down like that, so that made me a little frusterated on how you didn't make it like the game. It was a pretty good parody if you played the Earthbound series, and it was alright. There's a lot of room for improvement, and I think you can do it.
Ness climbed down like that just because I was lazy and thought it would be boring to have him walk around the whole way.
An alright sprite animation
The backgrounds looked nice and detailed and as Ness walked it kinda looked realistic, err as realistic as it's can ever get.
The storyline seemed to be a little lacking though, like it seemed things were happening for no reason and without adding to the story.
The one part I got a little chuckle from was where the monty python foot 'pancaked' Ness, it was pretty funny but other then that it was a little dull. I have never played any of Ness's games (other then SSB) so maybe it was a bit of a parody but I dunno.
Overall I thought it was an ok flash but with maybe a little more time planning ahead of time I think this could be much better.
Thanks for the review. I'll admit this could use some work, and at the end I kind of lost interest in making this movie so that is why I just ended it so abrubtly.
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