wtf...?
......almost made me laugh, but work on that
Reviews for "Ness Goes to the Arcade"
FattyWhale responds:
that? can you be any more vague?
i vote
high for any nintendo characters. especially classics. the animation, to be honest, wasnt that good. that hand drawn circle threw me off. but it had ness in it, so i had no choice to vote high. consider yourself lucky.
FattyWhale responds:
Yeah, after making this I figured that having ness in it would raise the score a bunch. Thanks for the vote
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Starting huh?
Well, I like that you're using sprites. I love sprites. Ok, You should consider making Ness a bit smaller, or the houses bigger.
The plot was ok for starters. Now, you should expand more.
I'm sorry if this might get blammed. it was a funny short for me. Just keep practicing Sprites.
FattyWhale responds:
thanks for the pointers
Not a bad start
I liked your idea of using ness for a flash- you did well with the background images, and the music- though low quality- was accurate for the scene.
The problem was your lack of plot =P Ness wants to go to the arcade.. falls, passes out, and... is squashed by a giant foot.... WTF?
You need to make an actual plot, with other characters for ness to interact with, and make the flash longer.
Not a bad idea, but you need to actually take it somewhere next time.
GL!
FattyWhale responds:
Yeah, my mind was kind of running when I made this.
-.-
this is the kind of stuff that makes people hate Sprite Movies.
FattyWhale responds:
yay