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This sprite movie is finally here! I worked hard on it and would appreciate reviews.
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I guess it was okay.
it was funny, thats always nice, and I like ness (well I like hurting him in super smash brothers.)
I am sure you hve heard this before. It is choppy, short and ness is too big. Make it a little less random. Keep working with them sprites, you will get good!
Thanks, and yes I've heard it all before, but thanks for the encouraging words. I always wanted to do a second sprite movie featuring ness, perhaps I will expand this episode at some point.
Ness is one of my favorite Video Game characters.
This flash was pretty Rndom because of two things, The Human Foot and The Knock out for 5 Hours. It was weird how the Human Foot came out of nowhere. I really didn't expect that to happen. The music in this flash was good from the game Earthbound. The style was pretty Creative. I got a smile when Ness put up the peace sign twice with his fingers. I like to use Ness in Super Smash Bros, thats why he is one of my favorite characters. Overall, this flash was good and I enjoyed watching it. Good Work! Responses are gladly appreciated. :)
Hey, atleast someone liked this movie, it's been getting a lot of bad reviews :( Glad you liked it!
Not Bad, Actually
This sprite movie had pretty good graphics and style, and the sound wasn't bad, either. It was pretty humerous, as well.
Well, it was far too short, and was it really necessary to put the characters name before every text.... since only one character talks, that is?
If I remember right, that's how it went in the game, with the characters name in front of the text, which is why I did it. Glad you liked this one
It could be a lot better.
At first it seemed like it was going to be really good. Then, it started going down hill. The random part at the end where he gets squished by a foot didn't seem funny to me. His walking went pretty smoothly. I think that it was pretty funny how he was climbing down the cliff and fell. I thought he was going to continue getting hurt on his way to the arcade. But no, that's not what happened. I think that you could have done a lot better and put an actual good story line to it.
Like I said, I did this on a whim so didn't really plan anything out. I'm working on some projects though, so maybe you will see something improved in the future.
An "interesting" little animation.
The animation moved very smoothly, for a sprite flash, also, I haven't seen Ness sprites in a long time, so that added to the originality. The music was suited very well, and the sound effact were very "sprite-ish", which was cool and fit the graphcs.
Some parts felt really useless to the story, actually, the whole plot was pretty mediocre. One part that was pointless in this flash is when he falls off the ledge and wakes up in five hours, you shouldn't have had that in. The ending was completely stupid too, it felt like you just got lazy near the end and just decided to end it a very stupuid way.
Overall, a pretty well done sprite flash, but a little too random. I hope this review was helpful!
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"The ending was completely stupid too, it felt like you just got lazy near the end and just decided to end it a very stupuid way."
That's basically what happened. I would say it more just lack of ideas that laziness. I made this on a whim and had no plans before I made it.
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