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It's not perfect but I'm definately improving.

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((( COULD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, kinda neat, some of the art and detail was cool but could be improved aswell, i was still impressed though, its very entertaining, you should make more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more detail, and more effects on center points of focus, and mayne work abit on the music it seemed like it could be better...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat flash could be better though...

~X~

needs work on the sound.

not to shabby. a fw points though; work on the audio (it was poor quality), clean up your characters. and possibly think about using speech bubbles with smaller print or possibly below screen subtitles. nice start though.

happy flashing!!

pretty cool

perhaps it's just me, but I can see that Mr.D Firth is having a positive influence on people. That's not to say that I think this was inspired by him, or copying in any way at all, but I'd be surprised if you (the flasher) are not a fan of Firth.

Good job. :)

WATCH THIS!!

This animation is funny as fuck! Just what i needed after a look day at college with fucking n00bs. This made me laugh - I urge everyone to watch this! IT'S THE PWNAGE! :)

Good

This is pretty good, to me, it has a touch of genius to it. Reminds me of the salad fingers gothic style. All you need is some creepier music. Although aphex twin is usually very creepy this track is too dreamy and happy.

nebnebs responds:

Yo thanks for the tip. I completely agree, I struggle to find music that suits my stuff. Yeah I love david firth animations. thats probably what feeds my imagination.

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Uploaded
Sep 15, 2005
2:07 PM EDT