Not Bad :D
To begin with the story was actually pretty fun could have been better but I liked it though their are few things you should watch youre next time :
1. It looked like the guy with the brown hair had no arms and the arms of the guy with the face moved a bit weird.
2. The mouths continue way to long maybe dont use that are dont use sound for them
Exept for those 2 things I actually liked this :)