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Ok give me a break i'm only 14. I had an idea and i tried my hardest. I want to have bad animation so i did but i think it diserves some type of reward.
The character design was fairly simplistic and I didn't like the color scheme, there were too many default gradients, the graphics would be much better without them. I liked the music that played during this cartoon, I think it really fit the writing.
This was very good for a first flash, though. I liked the way you executed the idea and the simple animation that went along with it. The graphics may not be the best, but they have a certain charm to them.
Overall, this was an interesting cartoon and I liked the concept. The execution was nicely done, the only place for improvement would be in the graphics department.
when he got fired he shoulda killed everyone
a little bit short, but it had a good idea to it and you put a pretty good effort into this one so it didn't suck.
i know how it is to be a starting flashanimator^_^
i'm just starting to make animations too, but i've got a few tips for you i hope you'll read these:
first of all, DON'T ever use those double colors, it looks kinda amateuristic.
second, if the guy walks away from the camera, he shouldn't face the camera.
btw, you can write a pretty good story about work for a 14 year old^_^
anyways, i'd like to work together with you some time
and last thing the review: no violence, no interactivity so that's 0 don't read it
no humor too, but i gave a 2 cause i just like it
7 for sound cause the music is good but it could do with some voice-acting,
6 for style cause it is a thing lots of ppl would see in real life
5 for graphics cause of the double colors>.<
overall good movie, i'gonna see more
I don't care how old you are, it was better than I could do at this point. Sad thing is.. Mr. Green Hair has my life. I feel the same way about my work. I hate it. Being fired would liberate me too. I like my other job better anyway. Make more, practice and soon you will be great. -=smiles=- ^^ <3
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