Great job for your first clip ;-)
Okay, after viewing this clip and taking into consideration that this is your first video and you are indeed, my age, I really find this to be rather good. I personally could never do flash without me putting some hard work into it, but I suppose I eventually will. Your clips seem not to be humorous, but seem to have the seriousness of a game itself(Aside from the game Escape from Monkey Island..). As in a game they have an occasional joke, as in this clip and others you have done.
This movie itself has a great message, and a soothing mood after watching it. Good job kid, I expect great things from you ;-).
-Dr.WalkItOff