drawings themselves were alright. but the voice acting, script and animation were all painfully bad. write a better script and watch some anime to see the style you're trying to replicate

The writing is bad to the point where it takes away from the other aspects of what's going on. The plot is dull and uninspired (I count at least three popular sci-fi films being blatantly emulated) and the dialogue could not be less grounded in realism.

Also there isn't much actual animation.

so I must say I will watch it when it comes out

Sounds like it has a very good storyline.

Well, it certainly needs a lot of work, BUT
I really do see potential.
If you keep working, i'm sure you'll make something great.
Ps:
That voice, of the computer or something, sometimes blew into the mic, kind of a turn off.