A bit hypocritical
Ok, so you seem to give the advice that reading books is better than playing an online game.
Humans love to venture into other worlds, because the real one itself is boring 24/7. That's why we created medias and arts. Movies, books, games etc. in the end are all the same. They exist to have us create other worlds in our own minds.
You can get addicted to everything that lets you forget your everyday problems.
Wether the substitute for your problems you don't want to face or can't even solve is in a virtual space inside a computer network, or found in a TV series that you start to have an obsession with doesnt matter.
It's all a matter of how much time you dedicate to what you want to do.
People who never had a philosophy class at university might not think of this and will go "wow, you're so right !" after seeing your movie. But, tbh, you're wrong.
Also, who are you to judge what is better and what is worse ?
What are you going to tell hermits that don't have any intention of having contact with society ? Do they live a worse life than me, because I know a few people, go poker at a friends house and meet people at university ? I doubt it.
Nice intention, trying to say that you want to make more out of their lifes than they might do right now, but the "argumentation" is very lacking.