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- Soviet Madness -

September 22, 2009 –
December 29, 2010
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

Author Comments

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Reviews

The Good:

I like how you've tried to do something a little differernt to the ordinary Madness gore-fest here. If you'd focused a little more on the plot, it would have earned an extra point or two. some parts looked batter than others, so there's promise still.

The Bad:

The sequences here slow. The spelling & grammar was evidently sub-par (not sure if it's your first language or not). The characters were not clearly defined enough (I couldn't differentiate the two protagonists and the germans all had the same lame haircut ). The rifle was anachronistic (an automatic bullpup?) and some under-use of the setting (it's Soviet Russia, where are the Commissars & the like?). And the ending was very cliche.

Suggestions:
- Try using a little more variety in camera angle/zoom during parts of the action scenes.
- Include more detail in the scenery (even if it's just painted on, it still adds to the quality)
- Thnik of ways to convey character emotions without using text. Even with faceless characters, it's possible to do.
- Think of ways of keeping the viewer's attention. Adding little moments of humor, for example.

DUDE inside the tank he managed to stop a blade with 1 hand!! and used the no-cutting part of the sword to cut-kill ?!?!?!?
thats simply wrong!!

but SWEET animation and sound..
for the next one slow a bit the text or dont put so many lines.. from time to time i couldn't read the whole plot :(

Some aspects of your animation were good, but most were not so good. Your characters are very stiff, and your muzzle flashes and blood effects are... mediocre.
I disliked the walking movements very strongly and the way you turned your guns around was just too slow to look good. You have some improvement to do in most places.
Bits I liked were the way some of the characters fell and the speed at some points of the actaul killing was pretty good.
But, all in all you still have a long way to go.
6/10
3/5

-xXSnowBladeXx

Honestly, I love these madness flashes, and for the record I work with an easier program called pivot stickfigure animator. Same basic rules of animation apply, easing, smoothing, etc.

The animation was really slow, the movement of characters was extremely slow and uneased.
I also understand it's a madness flash, but it lacked reality to it. For xample, rifles were meant to shoot from a distants. Why would a solidger run up to shoot at the target? Basically you were keeping the main character alive clearly to the flash viewer you did other things of the same sort too in the flash.
Another thing, you made text go by way to fast for anyone to read it.
So I know my review doesn't really make a difference to you or your score, im still submitting it in hopes youll take these points into consideration in your next flash.

wow this umm can i say portal that this is COOL and Happy Madness Day 2009 :D

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Score
3.83 / 5.00