The Good:
I like how you've tried to do something a little differernt to the ordinary Madness gore-fest here. If you'd focused a little more on the plot, it would have earned an extra point or two. some parts looked batter than others, so there's promise still.
The Bad:
The sequences here slow. The spelling & grammar was evidently sub-par (not sure if it's your first language or not). The characters were not clearly defined enough (I couldn't differentiate the two protagonists and the germans all had the same lame haircut ). The rifle was anachronistic (an automatic bullpup?) and some under-use of the setting (it's Soviet Russia, where are the Commissars & the like?). And the ending was very cliche.
Suggestions:
- Try using a little more variety in camera angle/zoom during parts of the action scenes.
- Include more detail in the scenery (even if it's just painted on, it still adds to the quality)
- Thnik of ways to convey character emotions without using text. Even with faceless characters, it's possible to do.
- Think of ways of keeping the viewer's attention. Adding little moments of humor, for example.