I felt that your graphics were "arvaged, although it was nicely put togather but it was not difficult either. Your sound was "Intresting" I felt because of the timing and how orignal it was. How ever your "plot" was nothing more to me then a "Hippie trip", but the idea was orignal but how ever it was not pleasing to me. I will say this to help you, let other peopel watch it but not friends or family because they will be biasist \, and let it set for awhile after you make it mabye a week or two, then watch it and make changes if nesseceray.
have a good day,
IbJammin