You can tell how you work on little details and have your own style while still keeping true to what you expect from a modern flash artist.

The animation looks smooth, the characters are cute, and appealing.

The only thing I'd change is to make the plot simple.. and easy to follow.. this one unlike other stuff(action) I've seen from you, is slow paced.. conversations, so it is an interesting opportunity, to pull the viewer into what's going on.
Maybe I expect a lot from you cause your flashes are good, I still want to see the conversation deliver more substance that I can get and really delve deep to what is going on. I rated you 4/5 and 8/10 and I know you can get 10 from me.

Good work, I wish you the best, keep doing what you love with the new stuff

decent graphics, and storyline, but the voice acting was poor. Why were there pauses after every line? Made the whole thing a lot more terrible than it could have pottentialy been.

this was awesome. i found it a little short tho. i'll be sure to check out the other episodes.

make more:).

i thought you had worked extremely hard on the animation, but i didnt really understand what was going on. the background music was a bit rubbish as well