nice animation, voice acting, and the story but it was too short why you dont make it a much longer?? btw its great

The main complaint I have with this movie is that nothing really happened. If you take television for example, something always happens that captures the viewers interest. This is worst than a filler because at least fillers are meant to be entertaining or at least shows another storyline. This movie was kind of just there and feels very incomplete. If you added more, it'll probably been much better. I also kind of have to say something about your anatomy. Your animation skills itself is pretty good, but the proportions on the bodies and especially the face are completely off. I notice that people have muscles that people don't have and the hair doesn't contour around the skull. Even though your going for more of an anime type style, it still doesn't look right and throws off the seriousness of the movie. Just keep practicing though. Your fight scenes are spot on, but I should be able to pause any part of this movie and feel that it looks correct.

I almost fell asleep during the dialogue. There's no action! MAKE THEM DO SOMETHING!

this actually has impressive voice acting and smooth animation. at times the art is goofy when the camera focuses on characters at an angle, but overall its all impressive

What was generally a visually pleasing movie is hampered slightly by a simplistic understanding of composition. Were you to focus more on the actual visual structure as opposed to the characters and their powers (not breaking what is a nice dialogue sequence to show off the flappy coat bit for no reason other than to show the flappy coat bit), and/or played with focal depth (you often have characters behind one another or in the background, and this could lend a nice, subtle effect that gives the animation depth), you would take your highly stylized art style (which i liked a fair bit) to a higher level. Think of it as improving the frame on which you can hang your stylized visuals.

Bad blending on the voice acting (over a second pauses, etc.), so fix that.

The music was a nice touch, subtle and fitting, like good OST music should be.

I cant say much for the story, you will either like the sci-fi/fantasy edge to it or you wont, as a viewer.

Overall, it was enjoyable and a great start, but there is much room for improvement.