Not bad! 3/5
A bit boring to read... however this has potential! Try to make the text buttons proceed using the space bar instead of having to click all over the screen!
Also try to make the fight scenes a lot more interesting, SMBZ style heh!
King Goomba's Revenge EP1
October 14, 2007 –November 5, 2019
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
Author Comments
Note: If you see a Goomba over the screen, click on it to continue the Movie.
I started to work on this flash 2 months ago, i finally made my 2nd flash!
I don't know what to say, but i hope you will enjoy it!
The movie may contains some grammar mistakes.
UPDATE: All peoples who gave me ideas are in credits now!
Reviews
<deleted> responds:
Fine, ill improve the battle scene.
However, what do you think it should make the reading more cool to read?
Put dialogue boxes, watch mistakes or both?
I don't think using space bar may be good, becose it will copy the ideas of Alvin-Earthworm.
Thanks for the review and some ideas!
really nice.
if only there was voices but u'll get em one day, uh how do u make videos and games? tell me plz
<deleted> responds:
You need to get flash.
For more information, go here:
http://www.newgrounds.com/collection/
flashtutorials
Thanks for the review and the score :)
Cool!
Good job! Action scene was good, some blood, 3D environment was good. Sound is always a plus.
BUT...
Maybe try to get voice actors, and watch that punctuation and spelling. Also, try to cut down on the scenes of talking, they get bland pretty fast. But overall it was good, 7/10, i voted a 4.
<deleted> responds:
Thank you! Sorry, i can't get some voice actors. I don't have credit card to pay them. I will probably have one some day. Maybe the spelling? I will fix it soon. Anyways, thanks for the review again!
Great!
I liked the 3D environment. You have great animating skills. I look forward to seeing the next flash in the series.
<deleted> responds:
Thanks, Etelelel! I'm glad you liked it!
Kinda boring...
Well only good parts were the Mario vs Kamek fights... everything else was rather boring, the first part where you used 3D background & 2D characters it didn't look good at all... clicking the Goombas to continue chat was annoying... took long to load but was short... grammar mistakes, which didn't even bother me at all... boring ending of the 1st part... well music was kinda good... sound effects weren't used too much... although it's good for a 2nd flash...
Practice makes perfect, so practice alot & make more flashes... although... I kinda can't wait for King Goomba's revenge ep2 to come out ;)
<deleted> responds:
You're right, i will try to improve for episode 2.
Thanks for the review!
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- 5.00 / 5.00