yo it was crappy at first but got better as it went on so part 2 i think it could be better

It just felt like it was done before. You made Fox, Falco, Slippy and Peppy way out of character, and it took out any chance of the crew having a deeper personality. Not necessarily dark and mysterious, we've already been given information on the guys. All you have to do, is put them in a situation that doesn't have the main focus on booze and sex, Starfox is better than that. Just rethink what you want to do, you don't have a deadline. Take your time and try again.

It had its moments, but the second half can be much better.

wow that's some great movie you did make. but it is lot's of text. do something about it because it will cost you good votes. but the movie was good. i mean like good story good characters and you've got a good sense of humor. also work on your spelling and grammer.
i hope i can see episode 2
succes!

P.S. only read if you are dutch
je hebt wat spellingsfouten gemaakt. werk eraan echt waar. mijn flash werd door die reden geblammed.

cant w8 till part 2. btw, can you teach me how to put music in flash movies?