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I thought the name and animation were cool, but there was no real story line which is why i gave you a 3. Hopefully the second episode will make more sense.

Very very intertesting. I'm hooked. I gota see what happens next. A glowing pocket watch, a mysterious craft, a vision of a destroyed city and now a strange visitor in the night. Oooooooo! The plot is already thick as pea soup!
Good work!

I would add only one suggestion, have the boy at least think out loud a little. Seems a bit like a melancholy seether video in the beginning.

Graphics are a bit simple, but with the mood it creates, its perfect. The style is very original, worthy of a 10, and I put 10 in the other catagories just because they are inapplicable.

it was really good, except for all the of the color fills we gradients, which kinda put me off.
also, during the run loops, it doesnt look right because you only have half of the loop done
it looks like a run, but not an authentic one