That was very good. I always love seeing creative minds at work, producing some amazing flash. Art work was awesome, but i noticed the animation could use just a tiny, little,miniscule bit of work at some points. As i said before, sound rocked. Great quality and it did a perfect job of adding to the mood you were tryin to get. Seems like this will develop into an immersive story if you make a series out of this, which you should do.
I was torn between giving you a 9/10 or 10/10 but im in a generous mood so ill give you 10. That is equal to 5/5 obviously. Very Nice Work!!