you're wrong
they don't fail to talk
they are the best at talking
actually they are the best at talking and worst at working on their parts

At 7/25/08 03:45 PM, BaSeBaLl151 wrote: Hello again. I decided to update my part and make it better than it was. ( now there are shockwave type things when people get hit and whatnot) Tell me what you think =D.
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/250708/5 6653_10SecondCollabPart.php

For some reason I love it.

At 7/25/08 05:36 PM, Argentin wrote: Try YoutubeDownloader and download it from youtube and with the same program convert it into an mp3

Anyway my improved part (i really hope i get Co-author cause i spent almost 2 hours for the finished product)
SWF
FLA

I dunno, not so funny...
Just, kinda slow I guess, didn't really like it.
No offense.

Well if a better crowd of people shows up I shall join. Right now there's too many mediocre artists to even consider it.

Did somebody say mediocre artists?!

On that note, I would like to ask for permission to join this collab!

At 7/28/08 11:36 PM, UberCream wrote:

Did somebody say mediocre artists?!

On that note, I would like to ask for permission to join this collab!

Sorry, I have low self asteem... Anyway, I'll whip up a sample animation so you can judge my skillz.

I'm glad to see new people are joining! Keep working on your parts, guys =D

Okay, this isn't my part. This is just a demonstration of my skilz. It was for the Lazer Collab Reloaded. Just ignore the shoop da whoop reference...

Here

My part's around 1/4 done, so it'll be done in a week or two (maybe more).

It's cause I'm a slow worker. :(

Mkay, i guess i'll join...

Howdy fellers, I was bored, so I decided to make a new part. I hope you know who Guy Fieri is!
My second part
Should I draw a background? Or just leave it how it is? Hope you enjoy it =D

It's a good animation but need some sound when guy pops out.

What do you mean by "sound"? There is already a swoosh sound when he pops out... Do you mean you want him to say something?

Baseball's second part: Animation was pretty good, but with no offense, I didn't find that funny at all...

Ubercream: You seem qualified, but keep in mind this isn't the shoop da whoop collab, this is the ten second collab, and my standards are most likely a lot higher, so do your absolute best.

At 7/31/08 12:17 PM, Evan wrote:

Ubercream: You seem qualified, but keep in mind this isn't the shoop da whoop collab, this is the ten second collab, and my standards are most likely a lot higher, so do your absolute best.

I know, shoop da whoop collab had pretty low standards... I'll do my very best!

At 7/31/08 12:17 PM, Evan wrote: Baseball's second part: Animation was pretty good, but with no offense, I didn't find that funny at all...

Haha, I reckon you didn't find it funny because my joke was kind of an inside joke...Maybe if i were to change who popped out, it would be funnier. Or maybe, you just don't know who Guy Fieri is, and haven't seen his (in my opinion) hilarious personality. Do you have any ideas of how to make it funnier?

Ok I made it funnier... Tell me how you like it!
The new and improved part
^^

Where has everyone been?! Anyway, I made a version of it where a weight hits the guy, he spontaneously combusts, lightning hits him, and Guy Fieri pops out at the same time. But, I still find the version with Guy Fieri only much funnier. What do you guys think?

When I ment sound I ment something loud that would Guy popping out more suprising.

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/060808/4 3609_TEN.php

PUNCHLINE MUSIC AND MORE ANIMATION PENDING.

WINK

Ok guys, I want to know which one you think is better!
Original
Newer(less funny in my opinion)
I cannot take Guy Fieri out, because I find him hilarious, and it'll break my heart if he's not in it.

Also, to FrozenSheep: You're part is decent, except maybe you can make it smoother, maybe add more than 3 frames for the walking... Lastly, it seems like he walks backwards at the end, before he winks.

hey the Guy Fieri thing (?) is fine, even though if nobody in the thread gets it then it seems probable that most people who watch the final thing won't get it either. If you're cool with that then by all means.

But the tonne thing falling on him is just dumb - the punchline is how surprising and incongruous the Guy character jumping out is, the 16 tonne weight isn't necessary and it detracts from the joke.

I think what somebody who said it needs sound meant was that some music or aural connection to the chaacter popping out of that tube thing would make it funnier. If he's going to do the cheesy thumbs up thing, possibly some cheesy production music or a theme from a TV show, just to sell the joke. Also in terms of sound, and this is just mean, but you've used the same "swoosh" soundbyte for each movement, including Guy Fiera (Fieri? that's probably not even close to the right spelling). It'd maybe be better to just do a quick google and find some others to vary it up - people get incredibly fatigued at hearing the same sounds over and over, even if they don't recognise they're hearing it, it's science.

anyway my part's pretty much done, except for voice acting being finalised. I'm going to make a few others too i think, i keep getting small ideas that won't work as standalones.

Hey man, thanks for all the advice...Finally someone doesn't have a retarted 12 year old sense of humor. I know that the weight and whatnot wasn't funny at all, but I thought that all the immature people on Newgrounds would find that "funny". So, I changed the sound effects based on your suggestions, which were very helpful. Here's the new part!
The new improved part

This thread seems to have died really :P

I'm sorry, I may rejoin but lack of interest has made me quit. Also I've pretty much finished my part and I'd like to submit it by itself because I have no patience, blah blah :)

Anyhoo, I do hope this gets made. If need be I will submit my part if more people join of course.

Soz </3

You know what? I've just thought about it and to hell with the post above. I've just watched the collab joiners so far's flash and it seems pretty good :)

Sorry, I just get really impatient :S

Yeah I'm out too.

I never finished my part anyway.

Seems to me like this thread is dead...

if its not to late i think i can do as good as some of the guys in the other one so ill join

"You have at least one solo submission that is currently scored 3.5 or higher on NG (meaning one submission you have done on your own, no collab or team)."

i think ive got a good idea now

it involves 2 boys, a watermelon, and a hobo

At 8/16/08 11:09 AM, MonoFlauta wrote: "You have at least one solo submission that is currently scored 3.5 or higher on NG (meaning one submission you have done on your own, no collab or team)."

Hmm, you're right, I just checked Evan's submissions, and he doesn't have a solo submission 3.5 or over... But he's started collabs before, I doubt it should be much of a problem.