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Some Advice.

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Some Advice. 2007-09-05 19:05:39


Hmm. I'm trying to step up and animate something for the Halloween contest. But my drawing seems a bit odd to me could someone give me some pointers for my drawing?


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Response to Some Advice. 2007-09-05 19:07:14


Arg.. I forgot to include my picture here.

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Response to Some Advice. 2007-09-05 19:08:40


One thing that looks odd to me is the way you connected the left forearm with the rest of the arm. Try making it look more natural.

Response to Some Advice. 2007-09-05 19:58:23


Is this any better?

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Response to Some Advice. 2007-09-05 21:55:25


At 9/5/07 08:01 PM, TheSnakeSkull wrote:
At 9/5/07 07:58 PM, NewFounder wrote: Is this any better?
His right arm(The one sticking up) looks longer than his left arm.

I fixed it i hope..

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Response to Some Advice. 2007-09-05 22:09:47


At 9/5/07 09:55 PM, NewFounder wrote:
At 9/5/07 08:01 PM, TheSnakeSkull wrote:
At 9/5/07 07:58 PM, NewFounder wrote: Is this any better?
His right arm(The one sticking up) looks longer than his left arm.
I fixed it i hope..

Left hand is backwards.

Response to Some Advice. 2007-09-05 22:18:58


I like it, but you just have to work out the proportions of the arms a little better


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Response to Some Advice. 2007-09-05 23:08:02


I love the hand in the first one, and work on proportions.

Response to Some Advice. 2007-09-06 00:05:16


He could use a lower half. =]

I'd like to see a shaded version, and a face. It's by no means bad, once you fix up a few flaws and settle on a right hand, I think it will be quite lovely. Keep up the art.


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Response to Some Advice. 2007-09-06 19:40:36


At 9/6/07 12:05 AM, BlackmarketKraig wrote: He could use a lower half. =]

I'd like to see a shaded version, and a face. It's by no means bad, once you fix up a few flaws and settle on a right hand, I think it will be quite lovely. Keep up the art.

Well I'm working on the legs and angles right now.. Excuse the leg next the drawing but anyways after i feel like the legs are nice enough i'll draw over it wth some pants. Also i'll shade after im finished with fixing everything up.

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