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Critique 2017-08-02 21:49:18


Can we come here for crit? If not, could you recommend me good places?
I would like to get crit on this
http://imgur.com/wtgtdEo

Response to Critique 2017-08-03 05:23:52


It is quite good to me. I am a new animator and I am at the same level as you. Can we animate something?

Response to Critique 2017-08-04 17:33:17


At 8/3/17 05:23 AM, Flashkid77 wrote: It is quite good to me. I am a new animator and I am at the same level as you. Can we animate something?

Thanks
I'll be off to college in less than 2 weeks, so I'm not sure what we could get done by then.

At 8/2/17 11:05 PM, TimCaloweh wrote: Sorry i'm not an animator but your creation is very funny. It actually seems ironic that your title says "I've been at this all day" and the runner suddenly falls. Hilarious.
At 8/2/17 09:49 PM, PentilexTV wrote: Can we come here for crit? If not, could you recommend me good places?
I would like to get crit on this
http://imgur.com/wtgtdEo

lol thanks, I definitely had fun making it

Response to Critique 2017-08-09 11:12:22


At 8/2/17 09:49 PM, PentilexTV wrote: Can we come here for crit? If not, could you recommend me good places?
I would like to get crit on this
http://imgur.com/wtgtdEo

Runner seems to distort and there is no anticipation. make the runner lean down just before he leaps off the ground, also possibly add some smears.