My poetry

[Witch]

I've decided to try my hand at some writing to keep myself occupied. I'll be posting most of my stuff here, so feel free to leave some criticism.

Here's a poem called Distant.

As the Earth sublimes, we may feel
a similar diffusion;
No longer mere scape of dream
(both splendid and illusory) fragments;
Labyrinthine chaos in collective mind.

I lurk among the forgotten ones,
waiting for some uncertain thing.

[killercat724]

Very well writen

[Tremax]

Witch! You're back! This is an amazing piece! You should post more.

[Witch]

At 12/30/14 12:22 AM, Tremax wrote: Witch! You're back! This is an amazing piece! You should post more.

Thank you. Yes, sorry for disappearing for a while there. Hopefully I'll be able to make some contribution to the Writers' Guild.

[Phation]

At 12/24/14 10:39 AM, Witch wrote: I've decided to try my hand at some writing to keep myself occupied. I'll be posting most of my stuff here, so feel free to leave some criticism.

Here's a poem called Distant.

As the Earth sublimes, we may feel
a similar diffusion;
No longer mere scape of dream
(both splendid and illusory) fragments;
Labyrinthine chaos in collective mind.

I lurk among the forgotten ones,
waiting for some uncertain thing.

Very nice Witch I have to admit. It gives me a feeling of curiosity for some unknown reasons, but nevertheless fantastic job.

[Witch]

Self-Immolation

I’ll tell you this—
There is no anchor
for perpetual
sorrow.

“Follow love…”
Lie to oneself?
Or actuate decay,
by means of
transformation.

Please know this—
One certain path
never fades!
If you deny it,
your Torment is justified.