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Alice 2014-08-10 02:18:05


Response to Alice 2014-08-10 02:56:49


At 8/10/14 02:18 AM, Zombony wrote: zombony.man@gmail.com

The eye looks a bit too big imo, makes her face look a bit out of proportion. However everything else is drawn well imo. Great job!


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Response to Alice 2014-08-10 17:53:36


At 8/10/14 02:18 AM, Zombony wrote: zombony.man@gmail.com

It isn't bad at all I think it would be better if you had her in a different pose. Maybe you could change the perspective of the piece and have it so the audience is look at her from the feet like this http://us.123rf.com/400wm/400/400/redbaron/redbaron0802/redbaron080200355/2605936-.jpg