Sup. can you read my passage please? I'm looking for feedback on some of my writing. - http://tinyurl.com/7s6leom
<Brief Intro> Name's Daye, writer & sound designer. My style centers around surrealism, morbid yet real chill, vintage & abstract. Its not fully self-deprived bullshit where i drown in my own nonsense, so don't be afraid.
FANTASM, is based on a nightmare i had one night. I'm not into poems as much as passages. Again, i would really appreciate some feedback/criticism from anyone. Enjoy & Thanks.
Also post your writings in the thread if you want, I will seriously love to read some new things & brutally criticize you loll.
LORD OF CHEESEBURGERS mobile coming soon, ya little yentas
