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Looking For Feedback - Fantasm Apr. 7th, 2012 @ 02:07 AM Reply

Sup. can you read my passage please? I'm looking for feedback on some of my writing. - http://tinyurl.com/7s6leom

<Brief Intro> Name's Daye, writer & sound designer. My style centers around surrealism, morbid yet real chill, vintage & abstract. Its not fully self-deprived bullshit where i drown in my own nonsense, so don't be afraid.

FANTASM, is based on a nightmare i had one night. I'm not into poems as much as passages. Again, i would really appreciate some feedback/criticism from anyone. Enjoy & Thanks.

Also post your writings in the thread if you want, I will seriously love to read some new things & brutally criticize you loll.