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Yeah,
just what I want it to look like.
And what do you think about it in general? Good or bad?
My background drawing skills suck, have to improve that...

Here is some Artwork of him, has no name yet....
any ideas?
When im done, i post the finished one

Forgot to add the pic and didnt find the edit button...

Here is the final version of him....no backgrounds though, didnt want to destroy the pic with a bad background.
Not so sure about the shading, first try with three different colors, but I like it.

The minimal difference of the colors is purpose. I want the yellow mask to pop out.
The character should not be too colorful. Maybe the contrast between the jacket and the shirt is a bit to low, I think i fix that...

So, I played on the shading a bit....Not so much difference, but a bit better.
Isn't it, Big Jonny?

I think the color of the lining in the jacket is too close to the color of the mask. You wanted the mask to stand out right? It's competing with the lining and my eye can't figure out which to gravitate to. (try a red? like satin)

Perhaps the mask could use some scratch marks or a high shine in certain spots to advertise its plastic nature. At least demonstrating it is not skin.

/2cents

At 4/17/11 10:39 AM, maadis wrote: So, I played on the shading a bit....Not so much difference, but a bit better.
Isn't it, Big Jonny?

Get what you mean.....But a red mask isnt good. Marvel has a villian with a red mask. Besides it is a skull like mask, but dont want to copy the idea of a red mask.
But it is a good idea to change the shined spots of the mask into a brighter color.

You are all trolls....

Some sort of avatar for me....

Here is a one of my drawings i did a few hours ago....
I will try a more detailed shading on this. Would be glad if you say what you think of it.
Normally i do a less detailed shading, as you can see on my other pictures.

Here is a version of the finished skin and hair. Took me 30 minutes...

Just finished it...
Say what you think

Awesome, I like your style and I hope you continue with the series I look foward to seeing more of it.

Thanks....thats what i want to hear^^
And hell yeah, i will continure with that series....and one day there will be a comic

At 6/22/11 12:32 PM, maadis wrote: Just finished it...
Say what you think

Woah... what's with the short arms? Even with a rather short torso like that, the arms should be longer.

The arms are in front of the breast. They are drawn in a perspective way, so they look shorter!

At 6/23/11 05:59 AM, maadis wrote: The arms are in front of the breast. They are drawn in a perspective way, so they look shorter!

With perspective, remember that what's closer looks bigger. The forearms don't look any bigger. And the foreshortening shouldn't be so dramatic that the upper arms are that short.

Its been a long time...

Finished the outlines

And finished....
but you seem not interested

Here are some masks. Have fun

Its Halloween.
So grab the sword and hunt the haunted.

Enjoy his meal

HULK SMASH

Finished