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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-06 23:05:48 Reply

Anime fail?

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-07 01:57:12 Reply

You've definitely improved, keep it up. Want to see you get even better :D


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-07 05:23:31 Reply

At 6/6/10 11:05 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: Anime fail?

The hatching and how you like make it go into colour hatching at the bottom is heaps good. The only problem with this is that the nose curve is too angles and should go up straigher and also the shading on the nose and the nose bridge part next to the eye is too sudden and it should be more gradual so it looks more curve like. The neck shading doesn't look right, but the rest is really awesome ;)

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-07 06:01:19 Reply

Flicking through this thread, you've increased your skill in multiples of 2. Congratulations.
Oh, and that's not Anime fail at all... looks like a catchy style for anime.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-07 06:16:51 Reply

Wow, thanks a lot guys. As for Cloudy, I can see the mistakes you've pointed out. I appreciate that you help me improve further. And I also give thanks to Lintire, Thanks a lot! I know it's a bit late, but here is my robot day lineart number 1.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-07 11:29:48 Reply

At 6/7/10 06:16 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Wow, thanks a lot guys. As for Cloudy, I can see the mistakes you've pointed out. I appreciate that you help me improve further. And I also give thanks to Lintire, Thanks a lot! I know it's a bit late, but here is my robot day lineart number 1.

I like how this is turning out.
My only suggestion is that if you wanted him to look innocent and whatnot, have like a bird or squirrel perched on his hand.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-07 11:44:52 Reply

At 6/7/10 11:29 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote: I like how this is turning out.
My only suggestion is that if you wanted him to look innocent and whatnot, have like a bird or squirrel perched on his hand.

Thanks jonny. The squirrel thing you were talking is a really good suggestion. But you see, that "ball" right above him is like a glowing ball thingy. But I think I will use that idea. Thanks a lot!


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-07 11:50:12 Reply

At 6/7/10 11:44 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Thanks jonny. The squirrel thing you were talking is a really good suggestion. But you see, that "ball" right above him is like a glowing ball thingy. But I think I will use that idea. Thanks a lot!

Yeah, I wasn't sure if that glowing ball was like an energy ball or was like the sun way off.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-07 13:28:09 Reply

Hey Fifty! I see distinct improvement over time and I appreciate your somewhat gritty style. What I would suggest though is to work on your anatomy - draw people from life(best) or from photos and really try to see the forms. Keep it up!


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-08 00:06:34 Reply

At 6/7/10 01:28 PM, Zhacross wrote: Hey Fifty! I see distinct improvement over time and I appreciate your somewhat gritty style. What I would suggest though is to work on your anatomy - draw people from life(best) or from photos and really try to see the forms. Keep it up!

Thanks for the advice dude! Yeah, I really need to work on my anatomy. Maybe because I'm used to drawing non-human things. Thanks again!


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-08 03:36:20 Reply

dude, I can actually see the progressive improvement over the course of this thread. Like, I actually see huge improvements from page 1 art pieces to page 4 pieces. I'm excited to see what your art will look like on pages 8-9

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-08 08:50:48 Reply

At 6/7/10 06:16 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Thanks a lot! I know it's a bit late, but here is my robot day lineart number 1.

That's looking awesome! Really good detail and pose. His right arm looks like it's resting on the ground a bit because of the hatching around it and because the wrist isn't bent enough for it to look like he's leaning on just his hand. I can't wait to see this finished and complete.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-11 08:48:27 Reply

Man, image resizing can be such a bitch. Here is my (finished) robot day entry. If you want a bigger and better version, *please click here*. Tell me what you think!

Special thanks: to Kinsei and the others on the lounge who helped me resolve this sizing problem. :D

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-11 10:17:00 Reply

Great submission you have there - see you took the whole "fuzzy wuzzy creature in hand" ideas into heart.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-11 10:57:02 Reply

My favorite scene in the whole Girlchan series. Made by Egoraptor.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-11 20:16:07 Reply

Meet Bob, our complaints manager, lol. 20 min sketch.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-11 20:25:45 Reply

Your Robot Day entry is absolutely gorgeous.
Killer textures, excellent composition and a very sad feel to it that I like a lot.
Really beautiful work, from top to bottom.

Also...Bob looks pissed...I'll be sure not to complain...again.


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-11 20:31:28 Reply

At 6/11/10 08:25 PM, antiandy wrote: Your Robot Day entry is absolutely gorgeous.
Killer textures, excellent composition and a very sad feel to it that I like a lot.
Really beautiful work, from top to bottom.

Also...Bob looks pissed...I'll be sure not to complain...again.

Thanks! Don't worry, Bob is a nice guy (monster) actually, he can't hurt a fly.


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-11 21:12:57 Reply

Bob, colored.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-11 22:42:01 Reply

What is this animal? You have these choices:
a.) That thing of Final Fantasy or whatever...
b.) Kevin from that Movie, what was that movie called, uhmm... Oh yeah. UP.
c.) An ostrich mutant chick baby.
d.) An undiscovered species of chikin.
e,) A totally gay MS-Paint Creature. Or...
f.) Who cares? None of the above. >:(

Winner gets a cookie. :P

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-12 01:09:08 Reply

At 6/11/10 10:57 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: My favorite scene in the whole Girlchan series. Made by Egoraptor.

I'd rather look at this image for 10 minutes than watch Girlchan 3.

aka this image is awesome and Girlchan 3 was horrible.
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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-12 01:19:33 Reply

At 6/12/10 01:09 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote:
At 6/11/10 10:57 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: My favorite scene in the whole Girlchan series. Made by Egoraptor.
I'd rather look at this image for 10 minutes than watch Girlchan 3.
aka this image is awesome and Girlchan 3 was horrible.

Wow! Thanks a lot Jonny. Girlchan isn't that bad. Although it was no that good compared to the other two episodes. Episode 2 is the best in my opinion.


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-12 01:59:49 Reply

At 6/11/10 10:42 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: What is this animal? You have these choices:
a.) That thing of Final Fantasy or whatever...
b.) Kevin from that Movie, what was that movie called, uhmm... Oh yeah. UP.
c.) An ostrich mutant chick baby.
d.) An undiscovered species of chikin.
e,) A totally gay MS-Paint Creature. Or...
f.) Who cares? None of the above. >:(

Winner gets a cookie. :P

Actually, I've decided that I'm going to choose option E. Just reminds me a lot of a picture done in MS Paint.
That doesn't make it un-cool, mind you.

Also, the cross-hatching doesn't come off as well when done with the brush tool.

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-12 02:03:32 Reply

At 6/11/10 10:42 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: c.) An ostrich mutant chick baby.

NO, its a toucan mutant chick baby :P

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-12 02:20:04 Reply

Lol. I think ashman is right it's an ostrich (toucan??) mutant baby. It was made from in MS- P.int.

Okay, for more important matters I made a pic of M-vero's KAWAIII Ultimate. Opinions?

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-12 02:48:43 Reply

At 6/11/10 10:42 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: What is this animal? You have these choices:
a.) That thing of Final Fantasy or whatever...
b.) Kevin from that Movie, what was that movie called, uhmm... Oh yeah. UP.
c.) An ostrich mutant chick baby.
d.) An undiscovered species of chikin.
e,) A totally gay MS-Paint Creature. Or...
f.) Who cares? None of the above. >:(

Winner gets a cookie. :P

g.) The product of a horny toucan and a surprised dodo bird.
Whatever it is...I like it.

At 6/12/10 02:20 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Lol. I think ashman is right it's an ostrich (toucan??) mutant baby. It was made from in MS- P.int.

Okay, for more important matters I made a pic of M-vero's KAWAIII Ultimate. Opinions?

That is brutal. Has really nice pop to it and I love the bombs.
You do great teeth.


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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-15 21:59:36 Reply

Dynamic Entry!

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-15 22:01:06 Reply

A robot awakening or whatever. Drawn in flash. And thank you antiandy!

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-15 23:29:15 Reply

At 6/15/10 09:59 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: Dynamic Entry!

Now that's hardcore =D

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Response to Fifty-50's improved art. 2010-06-16 10:54:44 Reply

At 6/15/10 11:29 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Now that's hardcore =D

Yeah, pretty much the most hardcore thing I've drawn in a while.


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