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Bbs Story "going East" -sarai

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Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 02:18:13


Yeppers...

Some of you were dreading this, some of you were wanting it... But in either case, my writing fingers need to be stretched and what better way to do it that on the NGBBS *?*.

So, I'd like to invite mostly people I know, or those with NG History to post. They'll need the following:

1) A reason for their 'character' to be "Going East" (The Asias) at around 2000. -Try to give me something to work with.

2) Where they come from.

3) And a little bit describing themselves.

ok?

I'm not adverse to deleting posts that fail to qualify for this....

If you can make a small effort here, I'll reward you with about a chapter a day of romance, intrigue, sexiness and betrayal where you are all set on a converging path, "Going East". Your chance to learn a little bit more about Asia and to see what impact you might have there as you slowly find yourself caught up in a plot that involves each and every one of you. Will you work together, or will you split?

Oh by the way, I'll be asking you to make certain decisions via e-mail as we go along that will impact on you and others. Therefore you need to be comfortable giving me your e-mail later (NOT NOW!)

So,

1)
2)
3)
4)
5)
6)

7- 12: Minor characters.

Yep, that's it, certain spaces are reserved. If you do want this, please make your first post good. If you think you've got a reserved space, AIM me tonight when I'm back from work.

Lots of love

-Sarai


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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 02:32:11


1) A reason for their 'character' to be "Going East" (The Asias) at around 2000. -Try to give me something to work with.
I will be going east to find my long lost brother whom was seperated from me at birth

2) Where they come from.
I actually come from New Zealand, but for the purpose of this story, I come from England

3) And a little bit describing themselves.
People tell me I am smart, but I myself think that I am not smart at all... I am not athletic, so intellegence would have to be my stronger point, that, and wit. I am short in stature but big in heart, and attempt to be kind where ever I go, although, I can't always keep to that as I find it hard...I would normally try to stay out of fighting and try to talk my way out of a fight, I would mostly run otherwise.


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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 02:33:58


1) I am going to china to participate in the biggest fish contest which is taking place every year in China. I think that this time I really have a chance to get into the first place, because this time I have the largest fish in israel.
2) Why, from Israel of course.
3) Well, I have a huge fish which i should carry with me everywhere I go, I save it in a huge tank of water, which isn't so stabled. I have a rage attack whenever someone or something pisses me off. However, in the rest of the time, I am peacefull and calm and even helpful...
is this enough, or should I write more?


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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 02:42:45


Why not? I'm pretty sure you can make a great story.

At 11/10/05 02:18 AM, Sarai wrote: 1) A reason for their 'character' to be "Going East" (The Asias) at around 2000. -Try to give me something to work with.

Beacuse it's my life long dream? No, i'd do it beacuse i'd pretty much learn how people are in foreign countries, what their diet is based on, and what people do for entertaining. But mostly, beacuse i really love just walking around and view the nature, beacuse it gives me time to think about stuff. Contemplate. Sort of like meditation, i suppose :)

2) Where they come from.

I come from Sweden, from a little (6th largest, in fact) town called Västerås.

3) And a little bit describing themselves.

Well, i'm into ambient music, and i will accept a challenge when the oppurtunity reveals itself. I don't know if i'm a romantic person myself, but i'm pretty sure i'm pleasant to hang around with. I play alot of bowling and street basketball. Ican stand cold temperatures, but not anything above 35 degrees centigrade. And i like to chat on these boards.

Will you work together, or will you split?

Interesting. All i can hope for is a happy ending. If i get accepted, that is.

Oh by the way, I'll be asking you to make certain decisions via e-mail as we go along that will impact on you and others.

That sounds even more interesting, not leaving everything to the author. I like that idea ver much!

Lots of love

Fingers crossed, beacuse this sounds like a story one really would be in. <3.

Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 03:09:13


At 11/10/05 02:18 AM, Sarai wrote: 1) A reason for their 'character' to be "Going East" (The Asias) at around 2000. -Try to give me something to work with.

my mail order bride never turned up :(
dodgy bloody mail order brides.

2) Where they come from.

outback australia, mate.

3) And a little bit describing themselves.

stereotype outback australian, drinks beer, watches sport and kills crocodiles with bare hands, but so alone.
oh, alone!
so he needs a mail order bride, pays in advaned.. loniliness gone - nope, it never turned up :(


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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 03:10:03


1) reason: My charecter is an independent musicain, trying to spread his name to the world, he plays in Japan to help get his name out there.

2)comes from Vancouver, Canada.

3) Plays multible instruments, listens to all musical genres. Influenced by Jeff Buckley, Queen, and Soundgarden.

That good.

Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 03:36:49


At 11/10/05 02:18 AM, Sarai wrote: 1) A reason for their 'character' to be "Going East" (The Asias) at around 2000. -Try to give me something to work with.

Otakus are infecting people on American soil and it's actually a plot by the Japanese diets to take over the U.S. while we have our minds worrying about Kim Jong Il so I decided to fix the problem from its roots and go to Asia.


2) Where they come from.

U.S.

3) And a little bit describing themselves.

well I grew up in Asia exposed to anime daily if that helps.

ok?
I'm not adverse to deleting posts that fail to qualify for this....

If you can make a small effort here, I'll reward you with about a chapter a day of romance, intrigue, sexiness and betrayal where you are all set on a converging path, "Going East". Your chance to learn a little bit more about Asia and to see what impact you might have there as you slowly find yourself caught up in a plot that involves each and every one of you. Will you work together, or will you split?

Oh by the way, I'll be asking you to make certain decisions via e-mail as we go along that will impact on you and others. Therefore you need to be comfortable giving me your e-mail later (NOT NOW!)

-Sarai

are you writing? if you choose me i don't think i have time to do more than make a decision given to me via email.

Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 03:38:12


At 11/10/05 03:36 AM, HeinousDude wrote: Otakus are infecting people on American soil

i have "photographic evidence" shall you need it -_-

Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 03:41:09


At 11/10/05 02:18 AM, Sarai wrote: So, I'd like to invite mostly people I know, or those with NG History to post. They'll need the following...

Wait... so I actually need to contribute... myself?

I can't just mindlessly post "I would like to be in your story", and be done with it?

DAMMIT!


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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 05:29:04


At 11/10/05 02:18 AM, Sarai wrote:
1) A reason for their 'character' to be "Going East" (The Asias) at around 2000. -Try to give me something to work with.

I am a nuclear scientist. I have heard recent rumors about some kind of nuclear breakthrough that has been made in the east, and I must find out more to complete my...shall we say, top secret government research.

2) Where they come from.

Southern California, the Los Angeles area.

3) And a little bit describing themselves.

He is rather quiet, usually, but can be known to make outbursts from time to time, when he feels pasionate enough about the subject. He is always wearing a pair of round glasses, and most of the time is seen wearing khakis and a winter jacket. He seems to do some mysterious writing in his small notebook from time to time...which he keeps sercurely locked up in a bag he constantly has with him.

Hopefully that's enough.

(Reason I thought of this...a "snark" is a type of nuclear missle. So..yeah. Idea just hit me.)

Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 05:38:37


At 11/10/05 02:18 AM, Sarai wrote: 1) A reason for their 'character' to be "Going East" (The Asias) at around 2000. -Try to give me something to work with.

I'm going to Japan. Why? Because I just want to, damnit. I'm going skiing if you really must know :p

2) Where they come from.

Devonport in Tasmania, an island just south of mainland Australia.

3) And a little bit describing themselves.

I listen to metal and Japanese music. Physically, medium height and long blond hair. Personality, quiet and antisocial, but quite a good leader (or so I'm told).

ok?

Hope so. Hope I qualify.

Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 05:53:58


At 11/10/05 02:18 AM, Sarai wrote: 1) A reason for their 'character' to be "Going East" (The Asias) at around 2000. -Try to give me something to work with.

A young struggling student from a poor family, who finds her self lucky enough to be choosen for a foreign exchange program. This is an enormouse oppertunity for her to travel and find adventure but also is terrified of leaving behind her sickly grandmother and troublesome brothers the only family she knows.


2) Where they come from.

New York, NY USA


3) And a little bit describing themselves.

Street smart and a bit unrefined, with a kind heart and big dreams. She always finds herself in bad situation and misfortune seems to follow her where ever she goes. Lost her parents at a young age and has played a big part in helping her grandmother raise her two younger brothers.

Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 06:34:23


If there's room...

1)Basicly a modern nomand. Went around europe, Holland, Germany, Denmark, Spain, Romania, popped at a short visit in palestine, headed to St. Petersburgh, took the Siberia track to China. No real reson for this, wants to see places, next destination would be crossing over to Alaska and from there Canada -> USA -> Cuba etc.
2)Comes from Finalnd. Dropped studies due frustration and went on a life on the road.
3)Quite tall, thin. Wears beat up trainers switches between two pairs: Red converses and old Karhu basketball shoes. Dark jeans, worn out (not pre-faded). Usually wears a corduroy jacket over a palid shirt and a t-shirt. Most of the time wears a scarf, either a gypsy, maatushka (russian) or a red-white palestinian scarf that has obiviously seen it's best days. On his head a mao cap with increasing amount of pins. Carries around a black leather bag with safety pins on the sides keeping it in one piece. Bags contents a mystery. Also carries around a bag with some spare clothes. Smells of weed (who didn't see that coming?)


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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 06:43:40


At 11/10/05 02:18 AM, Sarai wrote:
1) A reason for their 'character' to be "Going East" (The Asias) at around 2000. -Try to give me something to work with.

Well you already know I'm actually in Japan for school (almost going home too:)

2) Where they come from.

Greensboro, NC.....yeah

3) And a little bit describing themselves.

....You know me. Um I guess the character's name is GL though.

You also know my email (and need to check yours ;)

Make me sexy please :P


I'm not conceited...I'm convinced.

Also, I like to use ellipses.......a lot...

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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 06:54:42


At 11/10/05 06:34 AM, JohnnyWang wrote: 3)bla bla bla

I could also describe besides clothing ;)
Mostly a quiet kepps-to-himself person, mostly because, though travelling the world, knows mostly only finnish, swedish, english and russian. Pacifist. Light, at times pale skin. Face could use a shave, has a junkie-like beard. Really likes Pink Floyd and Jethro Tull, carries a copy of Dark Side of the Moon and Aqualung with him. Also reads books andleaves them to others to find. He's a socialist, and views China as a traitor to the ideal.


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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 07:36:34


My character going to Japan to get a well paying job. He comes from the quiet farms of Nebraska, but yearns for the city. So that is why he moves to Tokyo. He grew up in squaller, and he does not want his kids to grow up in poor living conditions.

So hes in Tohyo for two reasons:
Get a job
Starts a family
(doing both may prove difficult)


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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 07:44:35


How about Koufuyo as a himself:

Well, he’s an ethereal being from the astral realm of Yumedaria; his existence is the result of irrational thought and children’s snow-day requests manifested in a physical state. He’s a nice fellow, yet his actions rarely seem logical. He was raised by an invention idea being, thus he has a nack for technology along with his natural reality warping abilities and ice combos. Koufuyo’s always creating the strangest of inventions as well as developing new attacks, thus you’ll see him about town participating in strange activities. His appearance is that of a stegosaurs demi-human with long hair like platelets,
he’s considered quite the oddity due the fact that most ordinary beings on that plane of existence are usually elves. Despite what a few towns people say about him he maintains radiant cherubic ora in which no one is able to shatter.; some of his allies on the other hand are a bit more jaded..

I also neglected to mention that koufuyo also has a wicked hair attack and is able to use ice attacks.

He traverses eastern countries in the material realm, perhaps causing somewhat of an uproar.

Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 07:45:17


ZenGaijin

1.) Going east to absorb the culture he loves so much from the artwork to the dailylife.

2.) From the City of Detroit ( a Ghetto Sarai so you know)

3.) I tall 6'4 black man that is very easy to talk to.


"The worst kind of coward is one that is only brave enough to show his face in the dark...."

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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 08:12:41


At 11/10/05 02:18 AM, Sarai wrote: 1) A reason for their 'character' to be "Going East" (The Asias) at around 2000. -Try to give me something to work with.

She's a world-renown archaeologist with a strong background in Anatomy. She's studying human evolution in China. Her current dig is in Renzidong (Renzi Cave) in Anhui Province, eastern China. Her team is hoping to find Homo erectus tools and (especially) bones.

2) Where they come from.

Montreal, Canada.

3) And a little bit describing themselves.

She's 5'8, brown curly hair, blue-green eyes and an obvious Irish ancestry. She's calm, independant, well-grounded and loves her work. However, she has long working hours (and she makes them longer because she's a workaholic), and gets very cranky with little sleep. She's a perfectionnist when it comes to digging, but once off the site, she tends to be very clumsy. Outside of work, she loves to visit local towns and temples to learn more about their culture, but her lack of proficiency in Chinese (she basically only knows hello, goodbye, thank you) limits her ability to connect with locals. Her particular interests are Kung Fu, badminton and *gasp* cooking (but really isn't very good with the latter).

I hope this is good enough...

Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 08:51:07


please put me in sarai!


I hardly ever come here anymore....

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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 08:58:40


At 11/10/05 02:18 AM, Sarai wrote: 1) A reason for their 'character' to be "Going East" (The Asias) at around 2000. -Try to give me something to work with.

Making a documentary about Asian Prostitutes, our next stop, Japan. Once 4 days into filiming.... *OGMGAWDZILLA!!11!shift!!111!*.

2) Where they come from.

The Phillipines

3) And a little bit describing themselves.

People tell me I'm smart and terrifyingly unefficient, but that doesn't stop anything to keep me from finishing that last thing I did somewhere. Sarcasm is what I mostly emit from my mouth, no one can ever take me seriously, for that matter.

Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 09:19:19


Given the successes of FBI's story, I'm would be interested to see what you can do Sarai.

1) A reason for their 'character' to be "Going East" (The Asias) at around 2000. -Try to give me something to work with.

To continue my physics graduation. The University of Tokyo has excellent post-graduation program in solid state physics and after a great deal of effort, including learning a bit of Japanese (the Kana's, a bit of Kanji, a basic ability to speak), I was accepted to begin my post graduation in 2000 and I'll be living in a student dormitory near the university.

2) Where they come from.

I come from São Paulo (city), in Brazil. Since São Paulo is home to the biggest "Japanese" community outside of Japan, I have quite a few friends and acquaintances who are direct descendents.

3) And a little bit describing themselves.

Physical description: Height 1.89 m (6.2 feet), weight 84 kg (225 pound-troy), dark brown hair and eyes, beard and moustache, generally dressed in a relaxed manner, Caucasian.

Personality: A young, slightly lazy (leaves everything to the last minute possible) but eager to learn, post-graduate student. Loves reading books (and, thus, likes to make quotations and references in conversations), likes to promote an "intellectual" image and (a somewhat quirky characteristic) sometimes speaks using awkward constructed, long phrases with obscure words (example: "But most certainly you would not disagree that the relevance of such a matter today would be of great interest to them?").
A tolerant type of guy, not much out-going, but no anti-social either. Somewhat "clueless" towards practical matters (i.e. can't cook, wash his clothes...), a big football (soccer) fan. Usually very calm and controlled, but very, very rarely (once a year) snaps and lashes out in a very bad way. Just got out of a 3-year relationship, not on speaking terms with the girl.

Whew, hope thats enough to get me included. Oh, and yes, I based quite a bit of what I said above on myself, but (naturally) I won't say what... with the sole exception that I have indeed graduated in physics (well, nearly, this is my last semester) and that those are my physical characteristics.


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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 10:41:13


Add me in.

At 11/10/05 02:18 AM, Sarai wrote: 1) A reason for their 'character' to be "Going East" (The Asias) at around 2000. -Try to give me something to work with.

Holiday.

2) Where they come from.

West Sussex in England.

3) And a little bit describing themselves.

I'll write a paragraph. If you want any more, you can just ask.

Experianced fighter, hand to hand and with some kinds of melee weapon. Good aim with a sniper rifle but with other weapons, poor. Abit of a loner. Prefering to go solo than with other people. Doesn't work well with a team. On first holiday ever. Holiday alone. Brother only alive, father died being shot in the head while on duty as a police officer by a gang member. Since then, had hatrid for gangs, mafias, that kind of thing. Doesn't fight unless has to. Most of the time tries to talk out of arguements.

Good enough? If not, let me know.


This too will pass.

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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 10:42:01


At 11/10/05 02:18 AM, Sarai wrote: Yeppers...

Some of you were dreading this, some of you were wanting it... But in either case, my writing fingers need to be stretched and what better way to do it that on the NGBBS *?*.

There is nothing wrong with stories

So, I'd like to invite mostly people I know, or those with NG History to post. They'll need the following:

i havent been here forever, but i know a lot about the BBS,
and learning is fun! (sarcasm)

1) A reason for their 'character' to be "Going East" (The Asias) at around 2000. -Try to give me something to work with.

My cousin has been murdered, i want to find out who killed him, and maybe even exact my revenge, i fly there, to investigate

2) Where they come from.

I come from England, from a county called Gloucestershire

3) And a little bit describing themselves.

I am very down to earth, but i can do whatever i need to, even if it is extreme, i will do what i must

ok?

ok

I'm not adverse to deleting posts that fail to qualify for this....

calm mods are always welcome

If you can make a small effort here, I'll reward you with about a chapter a day of romance, intrigue, sexiness and betrayal where you are all set on a converging path, "Going East". Your chance to learn a little bit more about Asia and to see what impact you might have there as you slowly find yourself caught up in a plot that involves each and every one of you. Will you work together, or will you split?

beam me up scotty

Oh by the way, I'll be asking you to make certain decisions via e-mail as we go along that will impact on you and others. Therefore you need to be comfortable giving me your e-mail later (NOT NOW!)

uh, okay

Lots of love
-Sarai

get that imagination going!

:)


I hardly ever come here anymore....

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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 14:10:42


At 11/10/05 02:18 AM, Sarai wrote: Yeppers...

1) A reason for their 'character' to be "Going East" (The Asias) at around 2000. -Try to give me something to work with.

How about, fallen in love, going to grovel to the girls parents and ask for her hand in marriage.

2) Where they come from.

UK

3) And a little bit describing themselves.

Ex casino employee, outgoing and fun, intelligent yet not too serious about things. I Love to be positive and optimistic, and I always try to help friends whenever I can. Love to read and use the computer, I never watch TV, I sleep less than 5 hours a night and drink enough tea to give any normal person an overdose on caffiene. :)

Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 14:15:20


Sarai, before I randomly post everything, I would first like to know if you would allow me to join. Even so, I am not quite decided if I exactly wish to join, but knowing If I could or not would help me a lot.


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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 14:27:15


Going East

The cast:

GreenLanturn as Charles Onengi;
TBF as Sam Broe;
Frostbreath as David Coarse;
Ninja_Kitten as Natalie Serkhis;
JohnnyWang as Max Burbage; International businessman and Entrepreneur.
DancingTurkeyGod as Amelié Mauresmo; Famous archaeologist and writer.

Also featuring:

ZenGaijin as Ken Tanaka;
Vertigo200 as Hiroyuki Sanada;
Lost_Chances as Paul Evans;
Mast3rmind as Andy Lau;

And:

Sarai as Apple Lin.

Prologue:

The year is 2001, it's December and our view is that of a dingy street that is mostly illuminated by harsh Neon signs advertising garish products, sales and special offers. Pedestrians pass from one patch of tinted light to another in their hurry to get home. It's late in the evening, but most of the shops are still open in an attempt to fatten their tills in the run up to Christmas. The celebration of Christmas is relatively new in this country, it's more of a Western thing, but through clever advertising and marketing it has over the last few decades sown itself into the country's mind.

In the air over the street the first snow of the week starts to fall, it melts quickly on the Neon signs and as dirty droplets falls onto the heads and clothes of the people below. Cars forge their way through the street their yellow headlights cutting through the increasing sleet. Most of the cars here are small, there are also some small trucks, Izuzus, branded with garish characters and stuffed full of boxes or crates. Occasionally a loud sports car forges past, it's exhaust booming in the narrow street.

A little while passes and suddenly there's a rush of people from one end of the street. One of the last subway trains to serve this district has arrived and a flood of tired salarymen and office ladies trudge down the street destroying the fine white coat of snow under their polished shoes and boots. After a time though, the street quietens down and the shops start to shut, some of the cafe's stay open, a few still busy with regulars quietly sipping their drinks or eating delicate noodles.

This is Nara, former ancient capital of Japan and home to over a million souls.

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The year is now 1999, it’s another December and across the seas, many thousands of miles away the container ship Erasmus has left port at Southampton on the final leg of a mammoth journey. Having left port in Argentina the ship has called up the coast at Puerto Montt, Valparaiso, Arica and Lima. It has passed through the Panama canal, weighed deep anchor in Kingston before heading up the East coast of the States. Finally leaving behind the Americas the ship departed across the ocean for the United Kingdom.
Erasmus's cargo is mixed, she is a container ship on one hand carrying machinery, electronics and metals but she is also a cheap ticket around the world for those prepared to slum it in dingy crew cabins, eating stale bread and drowning at night in cheap liquor. The crew on the ship number some 30 or so and she weighs in at an impressive 67,800 tonnes. She is one of the larger ships on the ocean, but has the advantage of being Panamax friendly thus allowing her to serve in any part of the world her owners choose.
Also on board as she leaves Southampton are about 17 other souls, mostly in the 30s or 40s, but there are some younger students, backpacking it around the world for a pittance. Their final destination is scheduled to be Osaka, Japan, but before that they’re due to call along the African coast, India, China and near Malaysia. It’s a long journey and many of those onboard will depart at one of the stops on the way, either bored and homesick or attempting to seek new adventure in some exotic city.

The sea is calm as the ship loses sight of England and the majority of the passengers clamber inside their metal home with only the prospect of many more nights in the empty sea to look forward too.

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Max Burbage is an exceptional man, unlike most of the people onboard he was neither poor, no criminally inclined. He was kind in a paternal way, yet like a father he could be prone to bouts of extreme anger. That’s why they nicknamed him Max Payne in the boardroom after a popular computer game character. He was a business man who had successfully run many companies and made his fortune quickly, but not usually at the expense of others. He tended to sell out after a few years preferring to concentrate on yet another project rather than grow old doing one thing. To his fellow ship-mates Max looks about 28, but in reality he’s 32. Recently however Max’s life had changed, he still had riches, riches beyond most people, but he was bored of them and tired of the boardroom, for the last year or so Max had given up his suit and had travelled around the world leaving his brother in charge of his previous enterprise. He was educated by life and by his wits, rather than through a diploma and at this current moment it showed… Standing on the forward deck above the two massive front anchor housings he looked out to sea and shivered, something wasn’t right. As if in answer to his melodramatic thought, the first raindrops started splashing rudely on the deck. Shrugging his shoulders under the sea-coat he was wearing and pulling his cap lower over his eyes, Max trudged towards the seadoor and the relative warmth inside. He climbs down the ladder inside the door and walks up the imperceptibly swaying corridor to the galley.

“Hey Max! How’s it going up in the fresh air?”

Max smiled widely at the woman asking him the question, he liked her and over the last few months had really started to get to know her better. Among the other travellers she was one of the few who shared his tastes in literature and more importantly, she played a mean game of pool on the ship’s one torn-up table.

“It’s looking alright out there Amelié, but I think we might have a storm before long… It’s strange, the MET gave an all clear on the shipping forecast.”

“Well, it is the season Max, we did pick the worst possible time to be in a ship! Oh well, with me raking it off you every night on the table, it’s not too bad.”

“I can think of a way to make it better” Max said quickly and with a huge crocodile smile, “Much better and more interesting for both of us!”

“I bet you can dear, but alas, I’m only interested in old bones, not in new ones!”

TBC in 1 min

The Newgrounds O-Ren-Ishii but with a nicer smile and still alive

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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 14:29:52


As the ship lights flickered, they both looked up startled but the mighty diesel generators didn’t seem to have missed a beat and the lights came straight up again.

“La!” muttred Amelié. “It’s going to be one of those nights.”

"Yep, that's why it's good we've got each other!"

While talking Max had helped himself to an Apple from the galley store and sat down next to Amelié. They started chatting about this and that.

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-Sarai

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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 14:39:19


1) A reason for their 'character' to be "Going East" (The Asias) at around 2000. -Try to give me something to work with.

Im going east to start my own bakery ( as I reguest in most BBS Stories but never happens ), play guitar and to find the love of my life..

2) Where they come from.

I hail from the greay country (if you can call it that) scotland!

3) And a little bit describing themselves.

I am tall with red hair.. ok enough about my looks ( :P ) I like to play the guitar and have been for a while now.. I also play a tiny bit of drums.. I get easily distracted and are a great martial arts fighter!

That nuff?


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Response to Bbs Story "going East" -sarai 2005-11-10 14:42:45


evil sarai did not include me!

*tries to stab her but vanishes in a cloud of banning*


I hardly ever come here anymore....

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