It sounds ok but to short!
Nice job though. This song is good!
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The intro to Newgrounds Community Service, basic because the next artist should improve it
TheComet responds:
Heh, I'm definately going to make a refined full version of this soon. I had to intentionally dumb down this song and make it short with the sudden ending it has for the collab it's for.
sweet
alot of effort and sound added, its not annoying at all and the constant rhythem in the back is always slammin a little advice though it needs a powerful endin but then again not too many dance and trace songs have and ending sweet keep up the work
TheComet responds:
the NGCS collab is actually where each artist makes a part of a 1 hour long song, this is just the start of the song and the next artist in the collab takes where this ends and continues it on in their style.
SO much potential, but so little time it was made!
You music is great and all.. but I think you should try to take more time on it... I mean, making music is very hard to do, and it's kind of VERY good when an artist probably take a week or a month on just one song. IT mkaes you focused on this and only this song, which you can be surprised each and everyday by improving the playlist of the song.
This song had GREAT potential but it seemed like it was rushed, and the backround melody should of Automated to sound not like backround anymore! It felt like the melody was just holding back and teasing us that "Hey, I am back here, YOU can't enjoy the luxury of LITSENING to me to a great ACID POTENTIAL"... yes, I siad it.. This had a great possibility to go Acid so easily if that melody could of came out over that Bass and HiHats....
Like I siad, SOOOO much potential in this, but so little time it was made!
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TheComet responds:
believe it or not but I actually intended for the osng to be like this. Intended to be basic and have alot of potential. This is actually the intro for the NGCS collab I started and each artist takes what the person before them made and works off of that. I made this basic so the first artist would be forced to make a creative and original part instead of using what was already used or w/e. Basically, this was intentionally dumbed down :P I might make an actual full song out of this intro some day though, so keep your eyes peeled.
btw, if you want to see what I normally sound like, check out striker rermx, incapitation, auto, alchemy, and viper rmx.
hmmm
I think there's too much techno in this song to be a good Dance song. And the part on the end sounded a bit to weird o.O
But anyway keep it up!
TheComet responds:
I'm curious how this made top 5 this week :P
I intentionally had to "dumb down" this song to act as a basis for the next artist to build on.
If you want to see what the NGCS Collab is, go here:
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic.php?id=368445
No but seriously,
I dont want to do this project if its going to be generic techno-dance. Just thought id throw that out there. Its not a bad song, and everyone will be able to build on the song pretty easily. Good start
TheComet responds:
rye, this is a very generic and basic sounding song since what I want people to do is take this and turn it into their own song with their own style and genre. I made this like this just to act as a starter to the project, because making a complex starter would probably be a bit of a deterrent for new people (based on past performance/failures lol)
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