Hehe
Listen closely, the quality of that xylo isnt that great.. It clips like hell :( I love that melody though, but that's not your work, or?
I think the track overall sounds not bad. You could try to get the snare a bit louder.
Oops, the second part is out of rithme and out of tone, a shame cuz I really liked the first part.
The breaks near the end didnt really get my attention too, it was as if they came from far even when I turned my volume up. Try mastering it a bit louder, and eventually use some more wetness effects on some sounds.
3/5