it was good

it was good
but i felt like you were focusing more on the beat than the melody but its good
just remember more melody
but over all it was a 10!

Very interesting

Really progressive! Good use of rhythm throughout. The harmonies are also quite inventive in places, so nice work there. Although not particularly long, this is a good effort.

Things perhaps to improve upon in the future is balance and general mixing. The drums seem to be too low in the mix really. It sort of takes away from the energy slightly. But I'm presuming you've used MIDI instruments? If so I know it can be tricky to mix them for realism and "punch". But considering the instrument patches used, you've put them to very good use.

Hope this was helpful... I know it can be frustrating to not get reviewed on your work. Keep it up.

aled xela