not for me
drums too quiet, dont like the "guitar" tone, the melody itself was decent, but it just doesnt do enough for me, my apologies for the 5 =s
Metal never ends =]
When a guitar starts its solo make it double after the second tackt (don't know if it is translated like that ) . This might make a song much more powerful (even more than it is ) . I liked this . Not the best but good song .
the abss doing the triplet thought out the song or the guitar doing the cords
A few issues
in your comments it said you focussed on the drums but you can't hardly hear them coz they're drowned out by the sound of the guitar.
so if you did focus on the drums its a shame coz we can only hear them when they're doing the short piece when the guitar stops.
But apart from the issue with the guitar i thought that this was an ok song a litte repetitive but not to bad.
it was quite hard to balane the drums a guitar buty before drums would ahve the same beat for the whoel song and yeah the program i use is hard to write good guitar riffs on one because the tone is not graet and second its on a piano