Not my favourite
I think that this piece needs something else in it to carry it forward - it just sounds like a short, repetitive loop of the same beats and a dull sounding backing tune. I know it sounds harsh, but from the others of your pieces that I have listened to, I know that you can outdo this piece by far.
Plenty more variation is called for, perhaps with synths or keyboards just to relieve the monotony of this piece, as it doesn't even see to serve too well as a menu tune - people would get bored of the game or movie menu after too little of this tune had been played, I'm afraid to say,
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