Come on down the yellow brick road.....

This track should be longer, with less repetition. Also you never really jumped into a full beat. You just arranged the same parts aorund. Work on some driving melodies to carry out the song. As a guitar player I know you have the ability to create full songs with good melodies. And I know you know what good hardcore beats are like. Keep learning FL...you may like this now....trust me, one day you will look back at this and scoff!

Keep it wildstyle, bro!
JAG