I dont want to feel responsible for this submission. You did all this on your own will. I wouldnt have used the arps, b/c it is a FL demo. Yep I just exposed you. Any FL commoner tho will catch that.
Your gtr solo didnt fit in so well-maybe if you mixed it better it would. I suppose I could teach you how to mix today ?!
I noticed you added a pad which gives it a lil extra touch, but I think you could use more melodies and pattern sequencing to make this song more interesting. And you should work on your transitioning so that you could fit that GTR in better. Also switch up your arp progressions to make things more interesting and not so repetitive. ;]
Keep using FL, the more you do the better you will get :]