Nice, I think it could have had some EQ on the production but what a nice voiceacting!

Pretty decent

So doing voices is notbad based on this entry you should think about making a longer reel though this one was a short fourty seconds but still has a nice style about it bring in more accents and deeper and just all sorts of stuff just different elements to the voice it would improve on this greatly you have a decent voice and it shows just need more to this just an idea to keep in mind

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added elements to the voice would be a plus

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glad i could help you dude