-----Sparky's Notes-----
After a fifth recording and still messing up, I gave in to just post my most recent work. I'm practicing more live work (the acoustics is just a digital instrument, but the learning curve for the real thing applied), and I feel that i'm just getting worse at it. The more I seem to do music, the more I end up learning - but I swear my songs are just not what they could be.
Plus it doesn't help that my hands have been a bit shaky, hence some of the instrumental cutoffs at odd tempo points. Discouragement happens incredibly easy, especially as of late. I don't exactly have a mentor or teacher, or anyone I can collaborate with to learn new styles or improve my own. My way of learning seems to be just taking the leap and trying out a new style for myself.
Maybe i'm getting defensive for nothing, but i'm becoming a bit nervous uploading songs.
-----Tools-----
FL Studio 12.3 APB w/Novation LaunchKey Mini
---Update---
-Whoa what, Frontpaged?! That... That has never happened to me before! Thanks to all who listened and downloaded!
NEVER GIVE UP!!!! The old saying is "practice makes perfect".
The intro was captivating, but then things got a bit repetitive...
My feeling here is...
and I mean this sincerely, is that you have here the bones of of an intense orchestral masterpiece. A fundamental simplicity that can be built upon to be an explosive work, If you don't do it, you can bet some Newgrounder will listen to this and will.. :)
I see what you mean, but yeah. I've been doing this since 2010, and I definitely feel like my skill should be way higher than it is, but I guess people have different pacing.
It'd be amazing if someone could build upon this though. Who knows?
Thanks for the words and rating, it really helps.
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MisterMonroe 
