Very nice song, just some mastering needed

This is a well layed out track the intro brings the piece in quite well, but the leading melody sound needs to be brought out more, and if possible, make the distortion more aggressive sounding, I'm assuming you have a rack of mixers, EQs, Reverbs, and stuff. Bring out the higher range of frequencies for the guitar, and apply a compressor on the vocals, as some parts it gets to loud, and through the track, it tends to drown out the excellent guitar work. I'm waiting to see this piece finished soon, with my tips of course :)

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Awesome

This is a good song, I personally like the part where somebody does the screaming part. When the full version is ready, I'll be sure to check it out. Awesome work so far, be proud of it :)

good but...

this is certainly not punk rock. not sure what i would call it but certainly not punk rock. keep on making music though. i gave you a six on everything because i think you did well but it is unfinished and the guitar needs to be abit more clear. very nice thought. if you did this all by yourself gice yourself a pat on the back. if not pat yourself on the back and then pat all the people who helped you on the back.

cya ; )
phxatum

Awesome

This is great! I would really like to get the full version of this. I loved every part of it besides the fact it is unfinished.

Good one!

This is pretty awesome! I can't wait to hear the finished version.