uhm yeah?

This sounds just as if it had been made by DJRaveR (Go chack his work out), empty, with a low drum, and some eother instruments occosionaly thrown in, and don´t forget the praised sound effects. (I have been considering sampling my little sister´s crying for a beatbox song by the way)

I lovved the bassline man. It makes the song going even when the bass is the only thing going. You had quite a lot of diversity in this compared to the song´s impression.

I see you might have worked on this for a very long time, but I don´t think the result did give as mch as you gave this song, sorry.

Originality gets a 5, this sounds really familiar.

Clarity gets a 8 because it´s enough, but not more than needed.

Diversity is a 6, not much.

Effort is a 8, you have worked on this, but...

Overall is a 6. Sorry, I didn´t like it.

Nice beginning

The rest of the song was also quite good, I liked the bass drum in there, the other stuff was also very good, but I must admit, it gets a little boring towards the end, but you add more stuff on to make it flow a bit more.

4/5

well it flows pretty well

some of the scratches in the middle delay a bit so that it's off beat...it took me out of the song, but the melody is solid...not techno...more like hip-hop/funk with an electro-funk beat...soothing melody though...a nice attempt! 4/5

Please check out some of my stuff, I could use a review or two :)

Awesome!

I really like how the simple beat drove this piece forward. It is quite clear that music is your second language!

Pretty cool.

Not really my style, but I can tell a lot of effort went into it.

Also, it's pretty catchy.

=)

Nice job.