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Dec 15, 2014 | 1:05 AM EST
File Info
Song
9.5 MB
4 min 11 sec
Score
4.35 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.35 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
737 Plays | 23 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Punk
Tags:
your
rock
abyss
ska

Author Comments

I wrote the lyrics for this song last Summer, and it wasn't until about a week ago when I decided to actually make the song. But I didn't sing it, so basically you just get the instrumental part here. One day I'll get some vocals done for it, but for now, here you are. The drums are synthesized, but everything else (guitar and bass) is real. Enjoy.

These are the lyrics you'll never hear:

Why do you tell me that you're lonely
When I am right here by your side?
Is there is something wrong about me?
Is there something that you're trying to hide?

Well I am full of this, I am sick of this
You won't shut up about you're wonderful life
But when one thing won't happen that's on your list
You tell everyone you're not alright

Everyone says you're super nice
You're great, you're fun, you're wonderful
But with you I had to pay a price
And now I know you're an asshole

I stood by you for so damn long
But I guess I'm not good enough for you
What is it about me that is so wrong?
I guess I just won't do

You put me through all of this
With you, I can't find any bliss
The days with you, I won't miss
So goodbye, I'm leaving your abyss

Well I think you suck, you're full of shit
And yet I stay beside you
Each day you have to throw a fit
When we met, I wish I knew

That you'd dig me 6 feet down a ditch
You hated everyone but you
I found out you're just some stupid bitch
And now I hate you too

I stood by you for so damn long
But I guess I'm not good enough for you
What is it about me that is so wrong?
I guess I just won't do

You put me through all of this
With you, I can't find any bliss
The days with you, I won't miss
So goodbye, I'm leaving your abyss

What did I do? What did I say?
I know that you don't like me
Well I've made up my mind today
Since this is how you're gonna be

I try to give advice
But I know you don't accept it
I don't know why I try
So you know what, fuck your shit!

I stood by you for so damn long
But I guess I'm not good enough for you
What is it about me that is so wrong?
I guess I just won't do

You put me through all of this
With you, I can't find any bliss
The days with you, I won't miss
So goodbye, I'm leaving

I stood by you for so damn long
But I guess I'm not good enough for you
What is it about me that is so wrong?
I guess I just won't do

You put me through all of this
With you, I can't find any bliss
The days with you, I won't miss
So goodbye, I'm leaving your abyss

You put me through all of this
With you, I can't find any bliss
The days with you, I won't miss
So goodbye, I'm leaving your abyss

Reviews


JackRockerJackRocker

Rated 5 / 5 stars

This was awesome! Very upbeat, catchy and energetic. This would definitely benefit from a horn section, maybe there's some artists here on NG you could collab with. Great song man. I love it.


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r-dog12345r-dog12345

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very Ska-Punk. I really love it. Can't wait for you to put vocals into it. Keep it up man.


Twisted4000 responds:

Ugh I WANT to put in vocals but my singing sucks lololol but thank you, I'm glad you recognized the ska punk thing I was going for (minus the horns... oooh wow this would be amazing with some horn action)


RobotaoRobotao

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

very digimon



ZornuzkullZornuzkull

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Hey this isn't bad...little light for my tastes but it's alright...



yetanotherjohnyetanotherjohn

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Well done! Evokes images of an adventurous summer day.


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