I realised that,

I said I would stop by and review every now and then, I almost forgot! I'm very sorry, but I'm finally here lol. Alright, lets have a looksee.. Its a pretty meh song, it lacks originality, it lost a great deal to the lack of origninality, diversity, and it felt as though it was trying to pick its self up and get moving, but it was tied down. Its decent, I'll give you a decent mark for effort though ^^.

Claps feel a little overused, but the reverse cymbal, though frequently used in trance, made for a damn good intro into the main melody. Although the main melody jumped at one part about mid way, and it seemed to drone on in darkness, not really finding any particular path to take.

I hope this review is at least of some benefit to you. And I hear what you say, Z-Bombers would be picking up dog crap from my back lawn with their mouths if it were up to me lol =p. I've been hit many times as well. Oh, and hey, do stop by ^^.

3/5, but I'll give you 5/5 to help mend damage, good luck! ^^

pretty cool

its pretty cool XD but the transition from the first beat to the second one lacked muscle :\ after the transition tho the rest of the song was pretty cool XD 4/5 :)