The kick was week, and dont use that delay effect on the kick EVER AGAIN!!! It sounds kind of bad, no offense. I liked the melody a little bit. Could of used more work with that. The bass was some what to plain. Use a different bass. This does sound like a really good song if you put in work to it. It was kind of fuzzy when the snare came in =( Anways, nice try dude!
I spent like 20 minutes on this not a big deal really